Keep working on it

Not bad, just work on blending a bit better. Also try to avoid using the voice synth.
But other than that it's pretty good for a first song :)

Ummm no

techno is beautiful, this is not

I like!

Perty good man! Only thing is vocals need a tad bit of work, but i'm not disappointed with what i'm hearing now! Good Job Keep it up :D